I must say, as much as I appreciated reading what you had to convey, I couldnt help but lose interest after a while. It's as if you had a fantastic grasp on the matter, but you forgot to include your readers. Perhaps you should consider this from more than 1 perspective. Or probably you should not generalise so very much. It's better if you take into consideration what other people may have to say rather than just going for the gut reaction to the topic. Think of adjusting your own notion process and giving others who might read this the benefit of the doubt.
Posted by Olivia Griffin | October 12, 2010 3:05 PM
I must say, as much as I appreciated reading what you had to convey, I couldnt help but lose interest after a while. It's as if you had a fantastic grasp on the matter, but you forgot to include your readers. Perhaps you should consider this from more than 1 perspective. Or probably you should not generalise so very much. It's better if you take into consideration what other people may have to say rather than just going for the gut reaction to the topic. Think of adjusting your own notion process and giving others who might read this the benefit of the doubt.